*Topic Sentence – What key point to do want to make in this paragraph about both texts? That a bad environment can complicate family relations.
* Evidence 1 (key quotation/scene/technique): “What’re you crying for”-Harold Fingleton, The Camera technique shows the injured child, Tony Fingleton, bleeding and crying from a slanted upright view showing the un-remorseful father, Harold Fingleton waiting in the distance for his son to arise and fight back his brother, encouraging violent competitiveness to his young children, breeding a tough background.
*Evidence 2 (key quotation/scene/technique): “To do this to me, distracting emanates!”-Peter Helfgott, The camera technique displays a close up action scene depicting, David Helfgott;s father,