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Throughout this English 111 course, I have learned tremendous amounts of information and skills that I will carry with me and use throughout the remainder of my life. This class has helped me to not only become a better writer but also to become an active reader too. Needless to say, I have attempted this class in the past, this is the second time I have taken this course, and I must say I am glad that I did. Since then, I have learned and remember more from this semester than before such as the importance of pre-writing; choosing a topic and developing a thesis; how editing and revising can help construct an A paper. Unfortunately, I haven’t done any other writing this semester other than this class because this is the only …show more content…
This lesson helped me to develop strategies for use before, I produce the sentences and paragraphs that make up the rough draft. In the past, I often found myself sitting down to write and having trouble figuring out how to start. Being a student in this class taught me how thinking, talking about and writing down my ideas will help me to choose a topic and develop an order for my papers. Brainstorming, making lists or maps, and asking questions to help me decide on the audience, tone, and voice for my work. In my example paper, the tone was casually describing happy memories from my childhood and concludes with why those memories are sentimental to me. Throughout my writing, I used the first- person voice with a passive tense because I was reflecting on the past. My purpose was to entertain, so there is not any specific audience; just a narrative essay for anyone to read. Looking back, I remember struggling for hours putting this essay together because I did not use the pre-writing strategies that I now know, however in the future, I will continue to develop papers with ease by using these strategies to my benefit every time I …show more content…
Revising allows me to look back on my writing and make changes in my work to assure my paper is focused on the specific topic at hand, includes supporting details, developing better organization and checking purpose and audience. When doing so, I can make changes in expressions and language, arrange sentences to establish clarity or emphasis, while including new ideas or removing things I do not need. Editing deals with the grammar, spelling and punctuation part of writing. Proofreading comes in at the end when I am looking over my final copy for any minor errors. I learned a lot this week in our peer editing discussion board. I wish I would have understood the assignment better, so I could have submitted this rough draft of the cause and effect assignment, and had it reviewed by my peers. Seemingly now, I understand how crucial it is to allow peers to critic and review my writing because they can catch things I missed and bring new suggestions to help create an excellent piece of writing. In my future, while writing, I will continue to use these skills to ensure accuracy in my

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