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Sixteen. The big one six. The number I had looked forward to becoming since I was a little girl. I remember watching the hit MTV show My Super Sweet 16 with my sister and admiring all the lavish and glamorous presents and privileges that came along with the birthday celebration. Turning sixteen was something I had built up in my imagination as an extraordinary day and a major milestone in my life. When the day would come about, I would transform into a new and more mature girl and be fortunate to get my driver’s permit. By being able to obtain a permit, I would be taking the first step towards becoming less dependent on my parents, something I had longed for. The lead up to my birthday was spent with me constantly reminding my parents about acquiring a driver’s permit, but was almost always shut down and told that I would not be getting it anytime soon. In my parent’s eyes, I was too much of a distraction while they drove, always …show more content…
We had just left school and were headed to PennDOT, but my mother, being her usual self, frantically chose the wrong highway in the middle of chaotic traffic and led us further away from our end goal. After we had switched highways, I began to calm down, but was in for a surprise because that would not be our only obstacle during our journey. The second and third roadblock went hand in hand with each other, making my stress levels rise and patience to diminish. My mother’s GPS had failed us, a regular and very predictable occurrence, and gave us directions for the scenic route to PennDOT. This new route encompassed a speed limit of only 25 miles per hour and endless stoplights, which we received red lights for each and every light. After navigating our way through the city, we eventually reached PennDOT with only twenty minutes to spare and an exam that still needed to be

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