...Comma Splices and Fused Sentences (Handbook, Ch 36-37) Comma splice – when two independent clauses (or complete sentences) are joined only by a comma. Fused or run-on sentence – when two independent clauses (or complete sentences) have no punctuation. Dependent clause or fragment – contains a subject and verb but does not complete a thought. Dependent clause marker words include although, when, as if, because, before, even if, even though, if, in order to, since, though, unless, until, when, whenever, whether, while Identify the comma splices, run-on sentences, and/or sentence fragments. 1. He enjoyed his history class, it was the best class of his semester. 2. Her father bought her a new car for Christmas. 3. Even though he never believed it was his fault. 4. Jim tried fishing with spinner bait he finally managed a nibble or two. 5. Although he always claimed to be an environmentally friendly person. 6. While you may wonder about its usefulness, you will be glad you took typing. 7. The phone rang at least ten times my dad didn’t even pay any attention to it. 8. You should definitely listen to the Tragically Hip, they are a great band. 2 9. Unless you can make the commitment, don’t bother picking up a guitar. 10. My uncle told me not to play baseball he played all the time when he was young. 11. Alcoholism is considered a disease, but many people think it’s just weak willpower. 12. Because he told us we would...
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...consists near about 500 species in 31 subgenera. The word ‘carpenter’ comes from the fact that nearly all of its species use dead wood, bamboo, or structural timbers to build their nest. Associated members of the related tribe Ceratinini are often referred to as ‘small carpenter bees’. Taxonomy In 1802, the genus was described by French entomologist Pierre André Latreille. The name was derived from the ancient Greek word xylokopos which had a meaning of ‘wood-cutter’. Characteristics The females of several species live along with their own daughters or sisters and create a small social group. They employ wood bits to form partitions between chambers in the nest. But some species are not interested in making holes in wood dwellings. Although many species are known to rob nectar by slitting the sides of flowers with deep corollas, the species of Xylocopa can be important pollinators on open-faced flowers. In the United States, there are two eastern species: Xylocopa virginica and Xylocopa micans. On the other hand, Xylocopa varipuncta, Xylocopa tabaniformis orpifex and Xylocopa californica are the names of three other species that are primarily western by distribution. X. virginica is a widely distributed species. Some species are often mistaken for a bumblebee species because they are similar in size and coloration. Most Xylocopa species have a shiny abdomen, while all bumblebees have an abdomen completely clothed with dense hair. Males usually have a white or...
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...“The Glass Menagerie” by Tennessee Williams written in 1944. In many of his plays the circumstances reflect his own life, in the Glass Menagerie this is especially true. His father, a violent traveling salesman, and mother a puritanical, preacher’s daughter. He also had an older sister named Rose, whom he cherished, she suffered from psychological problems which lead to an institutionalized life. The Glass Menagerie represents a somewhat altered image of the Williams family. The play set in the 1930’s in the Wingfield’s meager apartment; which is in a lower-class tenement building in St. Louis, it’s a “memory play,” in which Tom (after his own real name Thomas) recalls scenes from his youth during the height of the Depression. Outspoken Amanda,...
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...One of the most significant days in a person's life is her wedding day! To ensure that such a momentous event goes off without a hitch, appropriate planning is required. And when it comes to wedding planning, picking one's partner could very well be the easiest of all the planning decisions to make. Months will be spent prior to the wedding researching vendors, comparing products and prices, meeting with photographers, hotel managers, and many more wedding vendors to determine how to save costs on each wedding item (Hammond, 2007). "The absence of a clearly defined project plan consistently shows up as the major reason for project failures," (Gray & Lawson, 2005, p. 118). Without an implementation plan that outlines budgets, how important tasks should be organized, and what the contingencies are in the event that something goes awry, could result in what should be one of the happiest days of someone's life turning into a complete disaster. "The success of your whole day depends on your ability to organize, plan, and budget," (Hammond, 2007, para. 1). The stakeholders in a wedding project are numerous. Naturally the bride and groom are the biggest stakeholders. But also included in this list of stakeholders will be the bride and groom's family, members of the wedding party (maid of honor, bridesmaid, best man, and groomsmen), wedding guests, wedding vendors (florist, musicians, caterer, cake maker, clothiers, venue directors), and the officiate. Further, a successful wedding...
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...dowry had been lost. So poor Mariana lived forlornly, waiting every day for the footstep of her stingy lover, and loving him still. Having appointed Angelo his deputy, the Duke went to a friar called Thomas and asked him for a friar's dress and instruction in the art of giving religious counsel, for he did not intend to go to Poland, but to stay at home and see how Angelo governed. Angelo had not been a day in office when he condemned to death a young man named Claudio for an act of rash selfishness which nowadays would only be punished by severe reproof. Claudio had a queer friend called Lucio, and Lucio saw a chance of freedom for Claudio if Claudio's beautiful sister Isabella would plead with Angelo. Isabella was at that time living in a nunnery. Nobody had won her heart, and she thought she would like to become a sister, or nun. Meanwhile Claudio did not lack an advocate. An ancient lord, Escalus, was for leniency. "Let us cut a little, but not...
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...Hamlet, the Prince of Denmark, was sad because of his father’s death and he was shocked to find his mother Gertrude already remarried two months after his father’s death. The Queen married Claudius, her dead husband’s brother and then Claudius became king. In reality, Hamlet was the true king after his father’s death. The reason why Claudius married his sister-in- law was he didn’t want Hamlet to become king. Although Prince Hamlet knew that there was something strange about his father’s death, he couldn’t prove anything. In addition, he could not think how quickly his mother could forget his dear father. Claudius tried many times to become friends with Hamlet because he wanted Hamlet to like him. One day, Horatio, a good friend of Hamlet,...
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...freshly-selected tender beef to make her boyfriend full and feel re-energized after a laborious shift of work. Every day, they greet one another with warm hugs and amorous kisses. A romantic relationship is not a sexual relationship one has to satisfy his or her partner’s physical desire, but a bond created from the potential of a lasting future together. Romantic partners have faith that their companions never lie or use them for personal advantage. They believe one another is not a judge to criticize their actions, but an understanding individual who listens and gives a shoulder when...
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...orderly progression irrespective of whether humans lived or died. Egyptian kings and queens were regarded as incarnations of the gods and provided order with the help from symbolic rites and rituals. Differing Egyptian cosmogonies can be found where each world was created in diverse means according to their understanding and beliefs of the universe. A similarity of these stories was the world beginning from chaotic, lifeless water, described as Nu or Nun , when for the ‘first occasion’ the sun rose from a mound in a period sometimes called ‘Zep Tepi’. This ‘first occasion’ is referred to as the appearance of sun-god Ra or the god of the newly-risen sun, Khepri. Other versions of the sun rising include it having emerged from a lotus flower that grew from the mound, in the form of a heron, falcon, scarab beetle, or human child. The three main Egyptian cosmogonies were named of locations they were centred: 1. Hermopolis - Hermopolis Magna, located at ancient site of Khmun, central Egypt. Eight Gods known as the Ogdoad of...
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...audience. Tom is the working man of the family, the breadwinner so to speak. He works in a shoe warehouse and the audience finds he is very unhappy there. Tom struggles through life without adventure. He longs to have adventure like the people in the movies that he sees all the time. Tom is called “Shakespeare” by his co-worker and friend Jim O’Conner, because he writes poetry. Tom cannot handle his overbearing mother and after a big fight breaks down and does something she asks. Amanda is the mother of Laura and Tom. She is the antagonist of the play. Amanda is still hurt by her husband leaving her all those years ago. She yearns to re-live her past of popularity through her daughter, Laura. Everything Amanda tries does not work as Laura is not like Amanda was. Amanda struggles with Tom to have him find a gentleman caller for his sister. Amanda does not see the reality that Laura is different, she only wants to see her imaginary reality. She is constantly living in her illusion and pulling her children down. Laura is the slightly crippled daughter. She is extremely shy and gets physically ill when in situations that she does not want to be in. Laura is the...
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...the first country musician to perform at Carnegie Hall. Hank Williams and Lefty Frizzell also contributed greatly to the popularity of honky-tonk. In the 1950s, the Nashville Sound movement led to a smoother sounding song. It combined country with jazz, swing, and smooth storytelling. Popular artists of this subgenre included Jim Reeves, Jimmy Dean, Johnny Horton, and Eddie Arnold. The grittier counterpart to the Nashville sound movement was the Bakersfield Sound movement. This also originated in the 1950s/1960s, but took on a distinctly more rock and roll sound with guitars and drums. Merle Haggard, Webb Pierce, and Buck Owens were the greatest contributors to the Bakersfield Sound. Buck Owens recorded “Act Naturally” which was re-recorded later by the Beatles and is often called the Baron of Bakersfield. Beginning during the late 1960s and continuing through to the mid-1970s, Outlaw country was the next big movement in country music. It featured singers like Willie Nelson, David Allan Coe, Waylon Jennings, Emmylou Harris, Jessi Colter, and Tanya Tucker. The biggest event leading to the development of the outlaw movement was when Waylon Jennings got independent recording rights and began recording songs that did not follow the formula for Nashville...
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...Essay 4 – History of Mexico Why were 300+ Spaniards able to conquer 40,000 Aztecs? Include geographical facts, Research Day of the Dead, What is it? Hernando Cortes was known as the Spanish Conqueror who defeated the Aztecs. He was born in 1485 to minor nobility in southwest Spain. He sailed to the new world in search of his fortune and joined a military expedition in 1518, lead by Diego de Velasquez that captured Cuba. Cortes soon became the mayor of Santiago and married Velazquez sister-in-law. Cortes was given permission by Spanish governor of Cuba, Diego Velasquez, to take a small group to Mexico on an exploration mission to investigate rumors of a wealthy civilization in central Mexico. Cortes was very ambitious and Velazquez was soon regretting his decision. In fact, he tried to rescind his order but it was too late. Cortes was already sailing to Mexico with a group of 11 ships. His first stop was at the Yucatan coastline before he proceeded to Tabasco. He had little trouble at Tabasco and was able to quite easily overcome the natives. It was here at Tabasco where he first learned about the great wealth of the Aztecs. Cortes went farther north and established Vera Cruz where he started planning his attack against the Aztecs. While he was Tabasco, he met his mistress La Malinche, who was fluent in Nahuatl, the Aztec language, and enlisted the help of the Tabasco natives. Since Cortes’ men had their doubts about conquering the Aztecs, and to prevent...
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...Conflict Essay “Everyday Use”-Alice Walker Alice Walker authored the short story entitled “Everyday use”. In this story we get a set of characters, round (Mama) and flat (quilt) and several supporting characters, like Hakim-a-barber. Walkers “Everyday Use” is set somewhere between 1960’s America right around the time the civil rights movement was taking place. The setting takes place at Mama’s house primarily with the exception of a flashback to their old house that burned down. The plot of the story reveals the characters cultural pride and ignorance towards the changing times. The themes in “Everyday Use” are, the meaning of heritage and the power of education. Additionally, the author creates different conflicts that arise throughout the story in which they are: man vs. man, man vs. society, and man vs. himself. Man vs. Man is first seen between Dee and Mama due to the fact that Mama doesn’t meet up to Dee’s standards. This coincides with the theme, power of education. Mama struggled to send Dee to a good school, which could have ended up doing more harm than good in regards to their relationship. Mama herself was denied an education and her youngest daughter Maggie lacks in that department. Therefor, giving Dee the advantage of being the only one educated which makes her arrogant and condescending. The education that Mama generously gave to Dee only created a bigger wedge between them and the family. Dee with her knowledge and way of the world becomes a...
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...Download all 8 books on PD and Life Skills from http://lifeskills.wordzila.com FREE! A miracle Miracles can happen if you believe in them. Scene setting Read the following statements. Which of them are true for you? Tick them. I believe in myself. I know Ill be a great person someday. I love and respect other people. I listen to my parents and teachers. I dont listen to people who say negative things. I am courageous. The first statement above is very important. You have to believe in yourself. You have to know that you are an important person. You have to know that you can do a lot of things. You have to know that you are the best. Now sit straight and say out loud: I am the best! Thats good. When you believe in yourself and know that you are the best, you can even do miracles. You can increase your grades. You can play better games. You can make lots of friends. The first and the most important thing is to believe in yourself. Then the whole world will support you. Reading Here is a true story of a little girl Angela who always said, I can do it. She believed in her dreams. Finally her dreams came true. Let us read how. Angela was an eleven-year-old girl. She was suffering from a nervous disease. Hence, she was unable to walk or move. Doctors said she would spend her whole life in a wheelchair. They said that Angela could never walk. But, Angela did not listen to the doctors. She believed that she would walk someday. Thus, she said, I will definitely walk someday...
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...HUM 1110.99 Final Paper A Comparison and Contrast of the Mother Goddess Figure Introduction This paper compares and contrasts the Virgin Mary and the Egyptian mother goddess Isis. A mother goddess is a deity or persona that represents motherhood, fertility, creation or one that embodies the bounties of the Earth. The Virgin Mary and Isis each represent perspectives of what is called the Sacred Feminine or Divine Feminine. Upon first glance, it appears that the similarities between the Virgin Mary and Isis are nothing more than a coincidence. I however, think The Virgin Mary and Isis are the same entity merely altered to fit different cultural needs. Author and psychic medium, Jessica Jewett, best describes this on her web page, “The supreme mother of the universe; she is loving, wise, courageous and sacrifices herself and her family of the benefit of mankind. In modern Christian culture, this description fits the Holy Mother, the Virgin Mary, but three thousand years ago and longer, this description also fit the most powerful Egyptian goddess, Isis.” (Jewett) I will be using their origins, symbols, titles, functions in religion, and seasonal festivals to compare and contrast The Virgin Mary and Isis in attempts to show how they are one in the same. Origins/Births Both Isis and The Virgin Mary are similar in the fact that they are considered divine mothers and venerated as a “life-giver”. They both had male offspring, Jesus and...
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...of her poems were published only because she wrote them to others who had them published. Dickinson's youthful years were not without turmoil. Deaths of friends and relatives, including her young cousin Sophia Holland, prompted questions about death and immortality. Since her house was located near the town cemetery, Dickinson could not have ignored the frequent burials that later provided powerful imagery for her poems. Not having conventional religious views may have also contributed to her isolation. She did have a belief in God but it was different than the views held by her peers. Although Dickinson's friends, sister, father, and eventually brother all joined the church, Emily never did. In her later years, Dickinson increasingly withdrew from public life. Her garden, her family, and close friends, and health concerns occupied her. After her death, her sister found several hundreds of poems she had wrote and it wasn’t until 1955 that they were all published. Whitman was born in 1819, between the American Revolution and the American Civil War. He came from a very poor family and had eight siblings. He had to work to help out his family...
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