howeverCOMMA her toughness really displayed itself when she graded papers. Her main focus[ed] was grammar and clean organization rather than THE ideas of the topic. The entire year I struggled with her; each assignment I struggled to form my papers the way she would want and failed to remember the grammar rules and writing standards. One assignment I can remember clearly, to this day, and I will never forgetCOMMA was the combined research paper for MY English and History classes. Our assignment was to research
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strengthen their relationship with God, Mom, and Dad through ways that are so much fun. The roof over Adventurer Ministry is supported by several strong pillars. You hold in your hands one of them: the latest updated manual covering all 83 currently accepted Awards for use around the world. There is of course, one small problem: This area of Adventurer fun is not a static field of possibilities, it is a constantly growing—maybe almost exploding—source of activity. Therefore even at the time of this
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I would have done differently if I would have had more time. As I began writing the review essay, the annotated bibliographies, and the academic argument, the one problem, or error, that became consistent was lack of detail of the citations I used in my earlier drafts. As I looked back at my essay for the academic argument, this became one of the most noticeable patterns that was consistent throughout all my
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Writing my MFD went well, I did not have to make any major revisions and, instead, was able to focus on the details of my work. I continued to condense areas of my writing, revised to make the content less repetitive, and made sure that the information presented was clear and direct. An easy revision I made was to my mapping paragraph; I made sure to address the general sections of my writing instead of addressing each paragraph. Another simple addition, adding a popular source, was made to fulfil
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to help you with math and it helps you if you have math anxiety and how to deal with it. OHH I almost forgot to mention the write point if you summit your paper it will correct all your mistakes and then you can go back later and fix it before you turn it in. But yeah this is a good school you should enroll the teachers are great well the ones that I have and all my classmates are friendly and not only that girlfriend it is super easy. LOL!!! * * * * * You asked your facilitator
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try to find a simpler and faster solution to a problem. If there was anything my high school English teacher has taught me that I would remember for life, that is, just like pretty much everything else in life. To be able to write a good piece of paper, it will require a lot of hard work. Unlike the teachers from my old high school, my English teacher of the high school I was graduated from, Mr. Roger has a lot more experience dealing with ESL student. Because of the district that our school was
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often, used, too many comma splices, which butchered the flow of my writing. I sometimes missed the MLA format details which lowered my scores early on. After I submitted the last essay, I was glad that I didn’t sign up for English IV. I enjoyed some papers
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Thank you for taking your time to provide feedback on my manuscript. I took the suggestions seriously and carefully and revised the paper accordingly. First, I have revised my abstract to highlight the importance of my study. In doing so, I have highlighted the race aspect of the paper and clearly stated major findings from the study, concluding with my contribution to the scholarship of intersectional identities. Second, I have strengthened my discussion of intersectional identities on page 5
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In this writing diary, I started on the first day handwriting the entry because of previous knowledge, I write more when I handwrite creative writing papers than typing it. When I’m on the computer or my laptop, I can easily get distracted. I knew from past experiences that if it was a long essay or report then I should type it, but if it’s not then it needs to be handwritten. But for some reason, during this activity, it didn’t matter if I wrote my story or if I typed it. Neither choice seemed like
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Week 3: Jan. 25-31 1/20/2016 0 COMMENTS Tuesday (Jan. 26) Reading: Writing: Rough Draft, Personal Essay: bring hard-copy to class Thursday (Jan. 28) NO CLASS--I am out of town Writing: Final Draft, Personal Essay: submit on Blackboard before the end of the day Note Lessons 5 & 6 of Style will be due on Feb. 2, so you can get a head-start on that if you'd like 0 Comments Personal Essay Prompt 1/14/2016 0 COMMENTS For this personal essay, you will explore an occasion when your view of
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