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COMM 170 Name: NIKESH KUMAR (300811080)
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Noble award winner, Politician, philanthropist and much more(3) Mr. AL Gore’s master piece “The Moment Of Truth” and the Canada’s own Cree playwright and novelist’s dazzling yet bitter truthful essay “what a certain visionary once said” are a hard one to compare and comment on. Though both highway’s and gore’s introductory and concluding paragraphs are effective and persuasive, both of them use a different vocabulary style.

Firstly, Highway’s introduction is very descriptive which paints an image in our mind (readers).whereas gore’s introduction in “The Moment of Truth” is effective because of providing scientific data to prove we are in a crisis and about criticism of the former president of the united states Mr. George Bush’s irresponsiveness to the number of environmental issues. Highway’s introductory paragraph is catchier because he use a descriptive way of narration which he gained from his real life experiences on the beauties of his countryside’s landscapes. (2) Highway’s description of the landscapes of northern Canada paints a beautiful image in the reader’s mind. The words used to represent the beauty of the landscape. And also Al Gore’s introductory paragraph in “The moment of truth,” is also equally effective. He starts off with letting the readers about the big crisis we about experience. He makes it even more interesting by explaining the meaning of crisis in Chinese and the characters’ meaning. This makes the introductory paragraph more informative too. The whole reading “The moment of truth” is categorized based on the Chinese characters for crisis mentioned in the introductory paragraph.

Secondly, Highway’s conclusion in “What a Certain Visionary Once Said” was very persuasive because of his use of the vocabulary and style of writing. And gore’s concluding paragraph is provoking and very convincing because of his repetition and provision of statistical data. The concluding paragraph of the reading “what a certain visionary once said,” was very appealing. Highway’s style of writing and description is very mesmerising. His concluding paragraph is kind of trying to convey his point. Also he makes his paragraph convincing and engaging by questioning. This makes the readers to think about it and makes the paragraph more engaging. Highway tries to convince the readers that people who don’t respect for the nature and take it for granted. Whereas gore’s paragraph is more emotional and provoking. Since he repeats his point over and over. Also he states about the achievements and accomplishment by U.S.A. some of the sentences like “We cured polio and helped eradicate smallpox, we helped end apartheid.” These kind of sentences provokes one true citizen’s patriotism and also it inspires the readers. This adds the paragraph a little bit of interest and a lot of appeal. He also tries to persuade the readers to his will and try to acquire political support.

Thirdly, highway uses the descriptive and imagery style of writing this technique imprints on the reader’s mind, paints the description as an image. But Gore’s style is more of formal and repetitive, his style in this essay is part scientific by stating proofs. For example in the reading “The moment of truth ,” the author gives many statistical data like the Tibetan mountain supplies up to half of the drinking water for the 40% population of the world also another is 70% of the planet’s surface is covered by ocean . He is also repetitive because he tries imprint his point on the reader’s mind by restating time and again. For instance he accuses George.W.bush’s mistakes repetitively so that the readers can get his point. But Thomson highway’s essay is very imagery. His vocabularies are very commanding and mood altering. His use of vocabulary changes reader’s mind not only visually but also emotionally. Also his narration was realistic too since he was born and raised in Brochet, Manitoba. (1)

Coming to conclusion which was eventually and inevitably hard. But still both the authors have clearly written an effective and persuading introductory and conclusion paragraphs and have used their signature yet different style of vocabulary and style of writing. Both the essays have been equally good but when it comes to one good essay outta these two Al Gore’s essay wins the battle. Since it has been more interesting than Highway’s probably because of Gore’s better use of vocabulary.

REFERENCES

THE REFERENCES USED ARE REPRESENTED IN THE ESSAY WITH A SUPERSCRIPT NUMERICALS IN PARANTHESIS.

(1) http://www.tomsonhighway.com/biography.html

(2) http://canadian-writers.athabascau.ca/english/writers/thighway/thighway.php

(3) http://www.biography.com/people/al-gore-9316028

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