...118 CHAPTER 5 Writing Business Messages LEARNING OBJECTIVES After studying this chapter, you will be able to 1 2 3 Explain the importance of adapting your messages to the needs and expectations of your audience Explain why establishing credibility is vital to the success of your communication efforts Discuss four ways of achieving a businesslike tone with a style that is clear and concise 4 5 6 Briefly describe how to select words that are not only correct but also effective Explain how sentence style affects emphasis within your message List five ways to develop coherent paragraphs COMMUNICATION CLOSE-UP AT CREATIVE COMMONS www.creativecommons.org Have you ever noticed that tiny © symbol on books, DVDs, music CDs, and other media products? It means that the person or organization who created the item is granted copyright protection, the exclusive legal right to produce, distribute, and sell that creation. Anyone who wants to resell, redistribute, or adapt such works usually needs to secure permission from the current copyright holder. However, what if you want people to remix the song you just recorded? Or suppose you need a few photos for a website? Other than for limited personal and educational use, a conventional copyright requires every person to negotiate a contract for every application or adaptation of every piece of work he or she wants to use. The search for some middle ground between “all rights reserved” and simply giving your work away...
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...GM588 – Managing Quality Enhancement Voice of Employee The Voice of the Employee focuses on providing a safe and secures workplace in response to instances of violence and poor employee relations (Evans, 2011). Organization utilizes the Voice of the Employee (VoE) to focus on internal processes as traditionally employees’ perspective wasn’t a top priority and not taken into consideration as far as the business was concerned. As part of an organization strategy to continue to evolve, compete, and improve the businesses’ bottom line, as they are devoted to understanding and communicating an open dialogue with their employees. A business seeks to respond to the needs and condition of the employees by strategically designing and implementing the VoE. The United States Postal Service (USPS) developed a metric to improve their internal processes by aligning with Occupational Safety and Health Administration (OSHA). USPS derived slang “Going Postal” after several workplace violences erupted with employees killing managers and other fellow employees. USPS wanted to focus on the internal workplace environment, safety, and employees’ satisfaction. An internal survey was developed as a tool to collect data and employee’s opinions to assess and analyze for workplace improvement, safety, and create a positive friendlier environment. USPS employees are able to deliver mail faster and customers are delighted. The employees are meeting their goals...
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...Direct marketing From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia For distribution and retail sales of comic books, see direct market. | This article needs attention from an expert on the subject. Please add a reason or a talk parameter to this template to explain the issue with the article. Consider associating this request with a WikiProject. (February 2011) | Marketing | Key concepts | Product marketing Pricing DistributionService Retail Brand managementAccount-based marketing EthicsEffectiveness Research SegmentationStrategy Activation ManagementDominance Marketing operations | Promotional contents | Advertising Branding Underwriting spotDirect marketing Personal salesProduct placement PublicitySales promotion Sex in advertisingLoyalty marketing Mobile marketingPremiums Prizes | Promotional media | Printing Publication BroadcastingOut-of-home advertising InternetPoint of sale Merchandise Digital marketing In-game advertising Product demonstration Word-of-mouth Brand ambassadorDrip marketing Visual merchandising | v t e | | Wikibooks has a book on the topic ofMarketing | Direct marketing is a channel-agnostic form of advertising that allows businesses and nonprofits to communicate straight to the customer, with advertising techniques such as mobile messaging, email, interactive consumer websites, online display ads, fliers, catalog distribution, promotional letters, and outdoor advertising. Direct marketing messages emphasize a focus on the customer, data...
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...Privatisation of Royal Mail: Will this lead to further efficiency improvements? 1. Background In recent years, the postal industry has changed. We have seen a recent boom in internet shopping, and while once Royal Mails sole purpose was to deliver letters, there is now an increasing emphasis on parcel deliveries. The shift in focus as well as the ever increasing competition in the industry, often from firms serving the 'bulk mail' side of the market such as UK mail and TNT is posing threat to the sustainability of the universal postal industry. It was decided in 2011 under the postal services act that in order to maintain competitive and to preserve the longstanding future of Royal Mail that 90% of the company would be privatised. This was seen as the most appropriate option, as the falling demand from consumers as they switched to their electronic communications came at a time where the government was not willing to add to public spending. In the event of this, responsibility for economic regulation was passed from Postcomm to Ofcom, who designed and implemented a new regulatory framework. Throughout this report, we will look at the potential benefits and detriments of privatisation; this will be applied in order to draw a conclusion as to whether the privatisation of Royal Mail was the most appropriate action. 2. Reasons for Privatisation One of the main reasons why privatisation may lead to greater efficiency than public ownership is that governments may not have exercised...
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...Unit 15: Managing business activities to achieve results Introduction: There are three sectors of the economy which are public, private and voluntary sector. I have chosen to do research on Royal mail they are they are the largest postal service up to date and has a long history of postal service dating back to the 18th century which is why I will do research on Royal Mail for the public sector along with John Lewis for the private sector. Task 1 Assessment Criteria 1.1 Evaluate the inter-relationship between the different processes and functions of a selected organisation. Include the following for a selected business organisation: mission statement, corporate culture, aims/objectives, business functions (e.g. human resources) business processes (e.g. management, operational and supporting processes). Selected organisation: John Lewis John Lewis Mission Statement John Lewis mission statement is to for the sole purpose ‘happiness of all our members, through worthwhile, satisfying employment in a successful business’. Where success is measured on our ability to sustain and enhance our position both as an outstanding retailer and as a thriving example employee ownership. With this in mind John Lewis strategy is based on three interdependent objectives partners, customers and profit. Corporate culture John Lewis has a good corporate culture which sets a standard for other businesses who do not follow this culture. John Lewis believe that all their employees...
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...Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. NOTE: WritePoint comments are computer-generated writing and grammar suggestions inviting the consideration and analysis of the writer; they are not infallible statements of right/wrong, and they should not be used as grading elements. Also, at present, WritePoint cannot detect quotations or block-quotes, so comments in those areas should be ignored. Please see the other helpful writing resources in the Tutorials and Guides section of the Center for Writing Excellence. Thank you for using WritePoint. Cognitive Dissonance PSY400 April 16, 2012 Cognitive Dissonance Leon Festinger made his way into the world of psychology by introducing the theory of cognitive dissonance (Myers, 2010). Cognitive Dissonance is a reduction in...
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...Good Business ethics and social responsibility contributes to the success and profitability of a company and is good for society. Funco Toy World Incorporated (Funco) is a toy store that operates in the United States. After extensive research the owners of Funco decided to expand into China. According to Orfield (2006) in 2002, for the first time, China attracted more foreign investment than the United States. The world’s fastest-growing economy is the second largest behind the United States, and by mid-century, it is expected [The passive voice is a form of "be" (is) and a participle (expected). Over-use of the passive voice can make paragraphs officious and tedious to read. Try to use the active voice most often; for example, passive voice = The paper was completed on time. Active voice = the student completed the paper on time--(Note: the Plain Writing Act of 2010 makes avoidance of the passive voice in official writing a requirement for government employees)] to be number one. “The moral challenge is even more intense for multinational companies who need to live up to moral expectations both in the US and in host foreign countries. In developed countries, the moral expectations of the host country are as stringent as our own. With third world host countries, though, the moral expectations often more lax, and multinationals are tempted to lower their...
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...Writing Report Writing Reports 2 A report is a statement of the results of an investigation or of any matter on which definite information is required. (Oxford English Dictionary) Reports are a highly structured form of writing often following conventions that have been laid down to produce a common format. Structure and convention in written reports stress the process by which the information was gathered as much as the information itself. Different types of report During my time at university it was asked towrite different types of reports, depending upon the subject area, which the course instructor have chosen. These could include laboratory reports, technical reports, reports of a work placement or industrial visit, reports of a field trip or fieldwork. Reports vary in their purpose, but all of them will require a formal structure and careful planning, presenting the material in a logical manner using clear and concise language. The following section explores each stage in the development of my report, making recommendations for structure and technique. Stages in report writing The following stages are involved in writing a report: • clarifying the terms of reference • planning the work • collecting related information • organising and structuring related information • writing the first draft • checking and re-drafting. Terms of reference The terms of reference of a report are a guiding statement used to define the scope of...
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...First person use may be allowed by the instructor. ] am responsible for supervising, we [Use "we," "us," or "our" to mean yourself and coauthors, not general humanity (or yourself and the reader)] ’ll [Contractions are inappropriate in academic writing--write it out] call him Joe. What was the message? The tasks that I needed Joe to complete while ["While" is accurate in linking simultaneous events (meaning "during"), but if that is not the case here, use "although," "whereas," "and," or "but"] I was on vacation. What channel was used [The passive voice is a form of "be" (was) and a participle (used). Over-use of the passive voice can make paragraphs officious and tedious to read. Prefer the active voice. For example, passive voice = The paper was completed on time. Active voice = the student completed the paper on time. See Center for Writing Excellence > Tutorials & Guides > Grammar & Writing Guides > Active & passive voice] to send the message? Face to Face [As an adjective, the previous three words are one hyphenated word] [these three words are spelled as one hyphenated word] communication What was the misunderstanding that occurred? Joe completed all [Writing suggestion: "All" or "all of" used as an intensifier very often can be removed with no loss of meaning] the tasks, but not [Remove comma (if the following is not an independent clause or last element in a series)] in correct...
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...Max one page resume for position in your field Improve your business writing 1. Audience oriented (who is my audience) 2. Purposeful (why am I writing to you, specific wording, one thing at a time. Reader can choose which one is better if option) 3. Economical (less is more) less words is better * To improve writing skills, you need 1. To learn effective writing process 2. To study model messages 3. To practice * The writing process 1. Stage1 Analyzing(who am I writing to?) Analyzing, anticipating, adapting 2. Stage 2 Writing researching, organizing ,composing 3. Stage 3 Revising revising, proofreading ,evaluating * **Read what you wrote more than once Audience Benefits Shape your statements to involve the reader. Strive to develop the “you” view. Ask yourself: what’s in it for the reader? **You have the goal but the reader has to be benefit. Example 1: Instead of this: We are promoting a are plan that we believe has many outstanding benefits. Try this: We will enjoy total peace of mind with our affordable holiday get away plan that meets all your needs. Example 2: Instead of : Before we can allow you to purchase items on this new account, we must wait two weeks to verify your credit. Try this: You may begin making purchases on your new account in two weeks. Example 3: Instead of : I need your response immediately so that I can ask the employee vacation schedule by next week. Try this:...
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...The 500-word Essay: Some Thoughts Gordon Thompson The 500-word length is consistent with many other kinds of professional writing, from blogs to book reviews. Moreover, if you want to capture and hold your audience's attention, the three-section statement maximizes your opportunity. The statements below provide ideas on how you might successfully write. The short essays for this seminar have several goals. 1. They provide you with an opportunity to explore a topic we have covered in our discussions and readings and to formulate an opinion about some aspect of those ideas. 2. These essays also provide me with a sense of your engagement and understanding of the material we cover, as well as your ability to explain your position. 3. Each essay offers you a focused opportunity to improve your writing skills. Grammar, punctuation, spelling, and citation all figure in the act of scholarly writing. A short essay allows me to work with you on these details. 4. The 500-word essay represents a miniature paper that includes all of the same features of a longer paper. Indeed, the longer papers you will write as Skidmore students will often consist of subsections consistent with the goals of these shorter essays. That is, you can form a large paper by organizing your ideas into short subsections that address the different issues comprising your topic. Finally, you should have writing clearly as your unambiguous goal. Consult the The Skidmore Guide to Writing for examples of how to cite, to...
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...Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. NOTE: WritePoint comments are computer-generated writing and grammar suggestions inviting the consideration and analysis of the writer; they are not infallible statements of right/wrong, and they should not be used as grading elements. Also, at present, WritePoint cannot detect quotations or block-quotes, so comments in those areas should be ignored. Please see the other helpful writing resources in the Tutorials and Guides section of the Center for Writing Excellence. Thank you for using WritePoint. Vulnerable Paper [This title could be more inspiring. Labeling it a "paper" or an "essay" is redundant (what else could it be?), and only a few words as a title are not very explanatory (or intriguing to the reader). An ideal title has between six and a dozen words ] -Part ll Legy George HCS/531 May 7, 12 Doris Chimera Vulnerable Population- Part ll ...
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...Running head: DECISIONS IN PARADISE 1 Decisions in Paradise 1 Carolyn Joseph University of Phoenix Critical Thinking: Strategies in Decision Making MGT/350 Orlando Santana July 29, 2010 Decisions in Paradise 1 The New Beginning Nik Joseph a soon to be college graduate interviewed and landed a job of a lifetime. His decision was made under uncertainty because consequences occur in the in the failure and thus depend not only on the decisions makers choice (2008). He would be an assistant to the director of strategic planning of a large investment company, Grand Bahamas Industries. This company is located in the Bahamas, China, Canada, Mexico, and St. Thomas, and all over the United States. The Bahamas Industries an environmental friendly company focuses on helping disaster stricken countries clean up, and help to create jobs for natives. Nik position will take him to the South Pacific a small island name Kava. His major concern was whether he will obtain home sick and miss his family and friends. Nik’s brief introduction of the island during training excited him even more. He would be moving to Kava known as the land of paradise with beautiful beaches, white sand, large palm trees, tropical breeze, and fun in the sun. Current Issues Landing on the small pacific island, he was amaze to find the condition of the island totally different from his expectations Kava was a paradise lost. This island had experienced many natural disasters, earthquakes, tornadoes, tsunamis...
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...Writing Reports By the end of this section you should be able to : O BJECTIVES • • • • • • • • Understand the purposes of a report Plan a report Understand the structure of a report Collect information for your report Organise your information Use an appropriate style of writing Present data effectively Understand how to lay out your information in an appropriate way C ONTENTS • • • • • • • • • • • • • Writing reports Different types of reports Stages in report writing Terms of reference Planning your report Collecting information Organising information Structuring your report Style of writing Layout Presentation Redrafting and checking Checklist W riting reports A report is a statement of the results of an investigation or of any matter on which definite information is required. (Oxford English Dictionary) Reports are a highly structured form of writing often following conventions that have been laid down to produce a common format. Structure and convention in written reports stress the process by which the information was gathered as much as the information itself. Different types of reports During your time at university you may be asked to write different types of reports, depending upon the subject area which you have chosen. These could include laboratory reports, technical reports, reports of a work placement or industrial visit, reports of a field trip or field work. Reports vary in their purpose, but all of them will require a formal...
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...Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. NOTE: WritePoint comments are computer-generated writing and grammar suggestions inviting the consideration and analysis of the writer; they are not infallible statements of right/wrong, and they should not be used as grading elements. Also, at present, WritePoint cannot detect quotations or block-quotes, so comments in those areas should be ignored. Please see the other helpful writing resources in the Tutorials and Guides section of the Center for Writing Excellence. Thank you for using WritePoint. The benefits of early head start [If referring to the child care program, this should be capitalized] Shanta Denard PHL/458 Febrary 21, 2013 Joan Middleton The benefits of early head start Many people have different opinions regarding...
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